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The Bar Graph gives information about College Graduates between 1995 and 2015. It shows who did more Graduates, men or women.
As can be seen from the graph the men have more graduates then woman in the year of 1995. In 1995 were the men about more than 40.000 and woman more than 30.000 so as you can see women had less graduates then men.
After 10 years in 2005 the sum was up for the men and also for women but not more than men. The men were 60.000 and the woman more than 40.000.
So as you can see again in the graph in 2005 are the men again more than women.
The last year in the graph, the sun risen again quit a bite. Here too in year 2015 also after 10 years as you can see did the men more graduates than the women. The men did under 80.000 and the women like 50,000
In the graph always sees that the men have more graduates than the women.
So i want to know about you, could such sentences fit, what i wrote?
did I wrote it reasonably well?
Thank you in advance