I was wondering if you could tell me if the sentence below is correct, especially the use of the adverb
“later on” and the comma as well.
“I went back to school in 2015 and later on, I joined SD University’s Graduate School of Management
in 2016 as a master’s student in Management and Business Administration.”
Should I replace “later on” with “Later” in a formal writing such as in a Statement of Purpose or I just
Thank you in advance