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RFH: "Later on"

nyraminyrami Posts: 3
Dear members,
I was wondering if you could tell me if the sentence below is correct, especially the use of the adverb
“later on” and the comma as well.
“I went back to school in 2015 and later on, I joined SD University’s Graduate School of Management
in 2016 as a master’s student in Management and Business Administration.”
Should I replace “later on” with “Later” in a formal writing such as in a Statement of Purpose or I just
leave it?
Thank you in advance

Comments

  • TeachTeach Your Teacher HomePosts: 10,464 mod
    edited March 2019
    I would avoid saying it like that, because you give an actual date later on. Also you probably didn't go back to "school". What kind of institution was it - college - night school ... MBA is a master's program.

    Try:-

    “I returned to higher education in 2015, and I joined SD University’s Graduate School of Management MBA program in 2016.”
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