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By all these lovely tokens
September days are here,
With summer’s best of weather
And autumn’s best of cheer.

Helen Hunt Jackson - September
The breezes taste
Of apple peel.
The air is full
Of smells to feel-
Ripe fruit, old footballs,
Burning brush,
New books, erasers,
Chalk, and such.
The bee, his hive,
Well-honeyed hum,
And Mother cuts
Chrysanthemums.
Like plates washed clean
With suds, the days
Are polished with
A morning haze.

John Updike, September
Learn English in September

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  • mheredgemheredge Posts: 49,060 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went...
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went.I enjoyed the beautiful.....
  • mheredgemheredge Posts: 49,060 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down.I enjoyed the beautiful peace and quiet after...
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down.I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along....
  • MichouxeMichouxe Posts: 12,502 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down.I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.....
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down.I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.
    I felt so peaceful ....
  • verom_gonzalezverom_gonzalez Posts: 12,405 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.
    I felt so peaceful that I thought of.........
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.
    I felt so peaceful that I thought of the wonderful past days ......
  • verom_gonzalezverom_gonzalez Posts: 12,405 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2020
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.
    I felt so peaceful that I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays...........
  • mheredgemheredge Posts: 49,060 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to...
  • MichouxeMichouxe Posts: 12,502 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I .......
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad.......
  • MichouxeMichouxe Posts: 12,502 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad because it will be ......
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad, because it will be a farewell.
    A feeling.....
  • mheredgemheredge Posts: 49,060 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad, because it will be a farewell.

    A feeling of dread came...
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad, because it will be a farewell.

    A feeling of dread came over me when I also......
  • mheredgemheredge Posts: 49,060 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endless beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought of the wonderful past days spent during my holidays. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad, because it will be a farewell.

    A feeling of dread came over me when I also thought of all the...
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded when the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt as peaceful as I thought about the beautiful last few days during my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end once and I felt a bit sad, because it is going to be a goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been......
  • amatsuscribbleramatsuscribbler Posts: 4,689 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been. I wondered what would....
  • verom_gonzalezverom_gonzalez Posts: 12,405 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been. I wondered what would happen with us in.......
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all.......
  • mheredgemheredge Posts: 49,060 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed, the way...
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen.....
  • verom_gonzalezverom_gonzalez Posts: 12,405 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades makes me......
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades made me uncertain, it was so.....

    PS @verom_gonzalez isn't it better to go one with the story in the past tense?
  • MichouxeMichouxe Posts: 12,502 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades made me uncertain, it was so surreal and yet true......



    PS @verom_gonzalez isn't it better to go one with the story in the past tense?
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades made me uncertain, it was so surreal and yet true. What would bring the......
  • verom_gonzalezverom_gonzalez Posts: 12,405 ✭✭✭✭
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades made me uncertain, it was so surreal and yet true. What would bring the following days? I didn't.......
  • PaulettePaulette Posts: 36,026 mod
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades made me uncertain, it was so surreal and yet true. What would bring the following days? I didn't have had any idea.......
  • verom_gonzalezverom_gonzalez Posts: 12,405 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2020
    Slowly the colours faded as the sun went down. I enjoyed the peace and quiet after a long walk along the endlessly beautiful beach.

    I felt so peaceful as I thought about the last few beautiful days of my holiday. Unfortunately it had to end and I felt a bit sad, because it was going to be a sad goodbye.

    A feeling of fear came over me when I also thought of all the strange things that been happening. I wondered what would happen with us in the future when all was destroyed.

    The way how I had seen the previous decades made me uncertain, it was so surreal and yet true. What would bring the following days? I didn't have had any idea, but I found out soon.
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